Here are some rough sketches of what I would like for my front cover, contents page and my double page spread. The sketches show Where the text will go, and where the images will go, layout etc.
Well done Jess, you have met the deadline and are showing signs of being a consistant Level 3 student. There are areas that need improvement however and these are: 1) Flat plans need more detail as they look a bit bare at the moment. 2) Editorial profile is a bit too brief and needs developing 3) Your shot analysis needs developing in terms of the mise-en-scene details and would look better in slideshare. However, you have a really pragmatic approach to your blog and you keep up to date with the work which means at the end of term, you will hopefully avoid the panic! Happy New Year, Miss L :-)
Well done Jess, you have met the deadline and are showing signs of being a consistant Level 3 student. There are areas that need improvement however and these are:
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2) Editorial profile is a bit too brief and needs developing
3) Your shot analysis needs developing in terms of the mise-en-scene details and would look better in slideshare.
However, you have a really pragmatic approach to your blog and you keep up to date with the work which means at the end of term, you will hopefully avoid the panic! Happy New Year, Miss L :-)